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Comment by Black Heart on June 10, 2008 at 2:21am

On Black:
“Rider Part 2”
Fade in:

Int. Mansion- Connecticut- Day

50 cent walks to his kitchen early in the morning after a long nite of partying with the Unit. We see Banks still sleeping on the living room furniture surrounded by beautiful women. 50 smiles as he notices the house in such disarray after another wild night. 50 then gets a box of cereal from a cabinet and fill’s a large mixing bowl to maximum capacity. He then opens the refrigerator to retrieve milk when he notices it’s all gone. 50 looks at banks and says.

50

Ride with me to the store real quick.


Banks

Banks still half sleep answers slowly

Aright


Banks starts to put his chains on before they leave.




Ext. Mansion-Drive way- Day

50 and Banks get into 50’s daily driver and pull out of the drive way on their way to get some milk.
They then pulls onto the main road and stop at a stop sign, when out of nowhere they are hit from behind. As 50 and banks are getting out of the car the other driver throws his vehicle into reverse and does a complete 180. As the driver tries to get away 50 and Banks jump into their car and pursue him.



“Music Cue”

50 performs his verse as he and Banks chase the driver that hit them.







As 50 does the hook in a general performance shot the words “Later that day” appears in the left bottom corner of the screen.



Ext. Southside Queens project- Midday


The camera pans down as Banks exits a slum with Yayo. As they begin to get into there vehicle Banks notices that a car stopped at the corner is the same car that hit him and 50 earlier that day. Banks nudges Yayo who responds by running after the vehicle.


Banks Performs his verse as he tries to keep up with Yayo running down the street to get the guy that hit the car that morning.



50 does the hook in a general performance shot with Yayo and Banks the words “That Night” appear in the Right bottom corner of the screen.



Int. Club-Night



50, Yayo and Banks move trough a group of people on a crowded dance floor.


Yayo performs his verse in the middle of the dance floor surrounded by club goers.

50 does the final hook as they leave the club and approach the valet.











Ext. Club- Night


As Yayo hands the Valet his parking receipt so that they can get the car they all notice that the valet is the same guy that has been driving the car they been chasing all day. Yayo then puts his hand on the guys shoulder and walks him to a secluded side entrance of the club With 50 and Banks close behind. The valet goes reluctantly.


Fade out:



The End

Comment by JayScholar on June 3, 2008 at 12:19am

You favor Halle pretty lady. Keep the beauty tasteful and simple. I like. Let me know when you post more photos ;-) Peace