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Permalink Reply by dyversastyle on July 3, 2011 at 3:02pm

I listened to diggin that song. okay you got potential i feel. the problem is how you pumped it up like you was something different. Maybe you got a different flow other than this song but this is all i heard so i can't judge totally. Second is your recording technique. Your voice sound muffled. it's either the mic or the software you use. Third is your vocal sound is flat. It basically sound dull and boring. i think you need more feeling in your delivery and you need to use more doubles and or adlibs. This just my opinion based off one song but since you posted this song, I figure its one of your better songs. I'm not hating so don't take it like that. It's just my opinion, constructive criticism. Good luck in your music career. Here's our video. We would appreciate it you critique it as well!!

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Permalink Reply by dyversastyle on July 3, 2011 at 3:06pm

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C8szAndwWrQ

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Permalink Reply by Trevis Mallard on July 4, 2011 at 1:41am

thanx man, i appreciate the feedback. this is link to my page. i got 16 songs, im goin to check your video

http://www.rapmonster.com/members/1365/chart.php

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Permalink Reply by Trevis Mallard on July 4, 2011 at 1:47am

im workin on a cheap mic, im goin to drop 100 on a good one soon. Your video is tight. I like the delivery. got that pastor troy flow with your own touch. Good job on production of the video too. Listen to my other songs, and critique them. I would appreciate it. I feel my lyrics are there, just got to work on the delivery. little more emotions

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