The 16 Bar Diss DROP Thread.Who Can Embarrass The Person Above The Most??

You know whats the deal. Drop a freestyle verse about anything. It has to be 8 bars which is 16 lines. Drop one and then comment on others. Be critical on their work so that they know if their flow goes or its a no. aiiight? OK GO HARD LET'S GOOO!!!!!

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Im New to this s*** but seeing some of the ryhmes on here made me wanna go at it!


(Hook)!
Money Check up! Check! check! check up!
Money Check up! Check! check! check up!
Money Check up! Check! check! check up!
Check your wallets check your banks!
Check check check up!

I sit in Darkness tryin fight my Demons for some reason
Fingers keep twitching so the weed keep blazing!
pockets stay light so my stomach is half empty
i see your wallet on road so please dont temp me!

dats who i use to be
Low down Brother
but now the light shines on me
i can do better
used to work in Barber shops fade all day!

Little fivers and Little tenners n***** get that pay!

Did i mention when i was a likkle yout I say!
I used to run around for Money and Loot i say!
back of the block, mans in the car selling weed
we used to get it regardless that was ours on the streets!

Ours for the keeps true im a man on a mission
i used to sit and think of bigger ambitions!
if Mumma ask
i can give her a little money
do the food shopping for the week and still have enough to go party
On the weekend

Money Check!

(Hook)!
Money Check up! Check! check! check up!
Money Check up! Check! check! check up!
Money Check up! Check! check! check up!
Check your wallets check your banks!
Check check check up!
here we go now feel my flow dismay comin straight from the westcoast
lettin them haterz no im ready for war if they want beef i go toe to toe
blow for blow track for track been away for a while but now im back
wit baseball bats crackin the backs of these wack rappers spittin the facts
thats how i do it aint new to this im true to this im makin moves
my house my rules mixtape now what u itchbays think ya gonna do
coz im in dis b**** to stay ok dismay ptown wa
i spit this s*** straight flip ya script bring the f***** pain just like cocaine
im dope and i aint never gonna change ill do me n let you do you
dont get in my way be carefull what u say dont f*** wit me i wont f*** wit you
ima do my thang and rep my crew we true ooohh what u f***** thank
i want this s*** forever just like drake em kanye west and wayne
dismay takin over the game coz 80 percent of rappers aint real
yall just talk alot im off the block i dont give a f*** i got mass appeal
the streetz feel me though i tend to be everyones bloody enimee in da game
but now im in it itll never be the same im here to entertain ok ok
O K



I WASN'T FEELING DIS I THINK IF YOU REALLY LIKE TO RAP YOU SHOULD PRACTICE A LITTLE MORE AND LISTEN TO OTHER RAPPERS(UNSIGNED).....IT MAY HELP YOU WITH YOUR DELIVERY...JUST AN HONEST OPINION
DIS IS JUST A FREESTYLE NOTHING MUCH JUST A LIL' TA' SHOW WHAT I DO.....


shiest raw harder den' ya' average b****/spit gutta deez otha' hoes average/ring finger sitting on 4 karrotts b****/north philly reppa'/home of da' homicide/were n***** get shot/and gone for dat' spital ride/da' gat ah' shut ah' b**** up leave er' petrified/i need ta' teach ah' class and show deez hoes how ta' ride/im just on my fall back/waitn' for da' connect ta' gimme' me a call back/got dat kush in/and da' reggie is all dat/



SHIEST RAW
Right on Shiest! I'm feeling that gutta s*** u spitten.
THANX.....THIS IS WHAT I DO PLAYA...
Girl looks kool booty big like vida's/and all I dream about is sex like adidas/when we in the bed man she growlll like a cheetah/never know the name maybe rita or anita/ that's all you get ..50 might want a new ghost writer lmao to hottt 4 thisis50.com
Girl looks kool booty big like vida's/and all I dream about is sex like adidas/when we in the bed man she growlll like a cheetah/never know the name maybe rita or anita/ that's all you get ..50 might want a new ghost writer lmao to hottt 4 thisis50.com
my flows burst in strikes of hell, Im syked as well,
cause all i did was start speaking then this whole verse typed itself!
Im depressed and ill'n from stress im still in, im a possessed villain killing and malest'n children!
My next victim im sik'n is whoever steps up spit'n a written claim'n its freestyle when it isnt!
Ill reach out through your monitor with a precise effect, snatch ya pen, write a check then slice ya neck!
Gimme ya chedda, f*** a word, gimme a letter, now observe how i serve'n them cause i shimmy it better!
Im dim like u never seen it this dark, im eat'n your heart, speak'n in tongues smokin sea weed with a shark! You aint even this smart, if you approach me your done. Im the unholy son of satan comin str8 out the slums! So break out and run before i take out my gun then scrape out your brains with a scalpel layered in c**..

ChetaCheez
What u know about cheta, I got the cheese-from the pot-to the block I zip lock them things-hip hop's not an art- it's a flop, a scene-like a rapper aint a rhymer if it aint 16's-I'm old scool like a Chevy-a big block Christine-wit no driver-just a navigation str8 to the fire-y others imitate-I illustrate wit desire-wit my hand around ur neck I bet a stack u expire-as i squeeze the life out u-and take ur mic-cut both ur hands off and rape ur insight-Yo! str8 is in flight-f*** a G5-I rather be on soul plane doing it live-and y Bar up 16-when I kill'em in 5-I think all of ya'll marks-I'm still waiting 4 replies...(chetacheez,musicof09,jholla,bobmarley,if I left out anybody u can get it too..)
money is 4 them real g's and cars and clothes & bicthes & hoes & cars and clothes & bicthes & hoes Its the chi town baby i get down with two ladys at the same time i got insane ryhmes major dimes i get the flipping with the base line gimme mine im on my grind all the time you no i shine brighter than tha sun shine got a 45 and a smith & western 9 dont you be stressing mines im bench pressing iron get you suckers guessing im a hood figure i will put you on the hood quicker you really would flicker like a light bulb rougher than a fighter culb richer than micheal money is 4 them real g's and cars and clothes & bicthes & hoes & cars & bicthes & hoes
You aint a thug I f*** around and beat you till
you cleand out like bud
aint tough and trust me wearing
that red dont make u a blood
Im like a labor i put in that work
call the kid shovel man cuz I stay doin dirt
look kid reality is my grind is street sweepin
u aint known
so that lets me know you somali kid starvin you aint eatin
And Im feastin like having 1000 snickers
while Im on the block you probably on twitter
you jus a internet gangsta starting computer screen beefs
while i stay posted like comments on myspace serving the feens
Im ready for war so if you go ahead and beef
im ready kid make a statement
f*** around throw u in a bag and leave you marinated
the flow is outrageous
which is why i got several punk rock beezys
following me like im f***** paradin
Muthafucka im as real as it gets and you just a parody
got you shook one scared of me

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