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The 16 Bar Diss DROP Thread.Who Can Embarrass The Person Above The Most??

You know whats the deal. Drop a freestyle verse about anything. It has to be 8 bars which is 16 lines. Drop one and then comment on others. Be critical on their work so that they know if their flow goes or its a no. aiiight? OK GO HARD LET'S GOOO!!!!!

Tags: 16, 50, 8, bars, cent, diss, eminem, freestyle, g-unit, hard, More…tony, verse, yayo

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Way better than most of the other stuff I've read on here. But you kept saying "I'm like" or "like," over and over. And you kept referencing famous people to explain everything you were doing, or "like." And as usual, you're like everyone else on here: The hardest, baddest, most weed smoking gun toting criminal, God ever created. I'm being critical 'cause you have some REAL skill. But until then, it fades to balck and falls in line with everything else, because it's the same.

This isn't 100 bars and running.....It's 100 bars.....while running in circles.
come on people. Give me something worth finishing when I start to read it.
everybody talking bout guns-riches-living in the ghetto-ya'll sound like hardcore b******, My spit so vicious-for instance I got ur eyes burning as u make the words rhyme in my sentence-It's pimpin, Please Investigate My Position Interact Now-on a few conditons-please stop wishing,d*** riding and kissing the ass of the last muthafuckea who was spittin-It's written 16 bars-go hard-let's go, not 16 bars and u sound like a hoe, now i'mma let u cats no-instead freestyling ur flow, call a muthafuckea out and let the Subscribers vote-that the only way you'll kno-if ur spit is hot, cuz some think ya'll have it, but really ya'll have not,point seen money gone, but get at me if money wrong, My ID name is STR8 on Thisis50.com......Yeah whatever anybody want to do My ID name is STR8 so any1 reply call me out but be sure that what u reallllllly want to do cuz it might be ur last call out........STR8..
I F**** WIT IT YOU WENT IN A LITTLE BIT......



SHIEST RAW
DUDE WHAT THE F*** IS U TALKIN BOUT THE ONLY SPIT U TALKIN BOUT IS Sh** COMIN OUT YA MOUTH
ALL SNAP MY FREESTYLE COMIN BACK I'LL SHOOT U JUS LIKE IRAQ AND I'LL SEND THE TROOPS RIGHT BACK IF U DISSIN THE TEAM are STAX AS TALL AS YAO MING OOPS I LIED ITS PROBABLY TALLER YEAH U REALLY ON 50 CUS U 24/7 D*** riding cus u a horse s*** talker a bull ball eater i hit u wit dis miny heater cus it gives some gamma rays like dat n**** hulk but it won't turn u green it'll turn ur a** into piece of usda choice meat
check my flow cus its hot and ur not fly and um on ya girl like a poster on da wall
get the f*** out of here with that whack s*** let the king show you how it's done..............

first off, wrong page come see me on thread page 135
f*** shiest raw, i'll flush on him easy like NBA LIVE
my piranas will eat you alive so come on and take a dive
my click will come out attackin like ah fucken be hive (haha)
puffin on the purp daisy, vision gettin kind off hazy
jewelry? you can't see yoself with none like tracy mcgrady (haha)
i'm amazing like grace, but i can tell this cat is shady (haha)
yo raps are s*** and comin at me, YOU AINT TOO CRAZY (HAHAHHA)
Im New to this s*** but seeing some of the ryhmes on here made me wanna go at it!


(Hook)!
Money Check up! Check! check! check up!
Money Check up! Check! check! check up!
Money Check up! Check! check! check up!
Check your wallets check your banks!
Check check check up!

I sit in Darkness tryin fight my Demons for some reason
Fingers keep twitching so the weed keep blazing!
pockets stay light so my stomach is half empty
i see your wallet on road so please dont temp me!

dats who i use to be
Low down Brother
but now the light shines on me
i can do better
used to work in Barber shops fade all day!

Little fivers and Little tenners niggaz get that pay!

Did i mention when i was a likkle yout I say!
I used to run around for Money and Loot i say!
back of the block, mans in the car selling weed
we used to get it regardless that was ours on the streets!

Ours for the keeps true im a man on a mission
i used to sit and think of bigger ambitions!
if Mumma ask
i can give her a little money
do the food shopping for the week and still have enough to go party
On the weekend

Money Check!

(Hook)!
Money Check up! Check! check! check up!
Money Check up! Check! check! check up!
Money Check up! Check! check! check up!
Check your wallets check your banks!
Check check check up!
here we go now feel my flow dismay comin straight from the westcoast
lettin them haterz no im ready for war if they want beef i go toe to toe
blow for blow track for track been away for a while but now im back
wit baseball bats crackin the backs of these wack rappers spittin the facts
thats how i do it aint new to this im true to this im makin moves
my house my rules mixtape now what u itchbays think ya gonna do
coz im in dis b**** to stay ok dismay ptown wa
i spit this s*** straight flip ya script bring the f***** pain just like cocaine
im dope and i aint never gonna change ill do me n let you do you
dont get in my way be carefull what u say dont f*** wit me i wont f*** wit you
ima do my thang and rep my crew we true ooohh what u f***** thank
i want this s*** forever just like drake em kanye west and wayne
dismay takin over the game coz 80 percent of rappers aint real
yall just talk alot im off the block i dont give a f*** i got mass appeal
the streetz feel me though i tend to be everyones bloody enimee in da game
but now im in it itll never be the same im here to entertain ok ok
O K



I WASN'T FEELING DIS I THINK IF YOU REALLY LIKE TO RAP YOU SHOULD PRACTICE A LITTLE MORE AND LISTEN TO OTHER RAPPERS(UNSIGNED).....IT MAY HELP YOU WITH YOUR DELIVERY...JUST AN HONEST OPINION
DIS IS JUST A FREESTYLE NOTHING MUCH JUST A LIL' TA' SHOW WHAT I DO.....


shiest raw harder den' ya' average b****/spit gutta deez otha' hoes average/ring finger sitting on 4 karrotts b****/north philly reppa'/home of da' homicide/were niggaz get shot/and gone for dat' spital ride/da' gat ah' shut ah' b**** up leave er' petrified/i need ta' teach ah' class and show deez hoes how ta' ride/im just on my fall back/waitn' for da' connect ta' gimme' me a call back/got dat kush in/and da' reggie is all dat/



SHIEST RAW
Right on Shiest! I'm feeling that gutta s*** u spitten.
THANX.....THIS IS WHAT I DO PLAYA...

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