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The 16 Bar Diss DROP Thread.Who Can Embarrass The Person Above The Most??

You know whats the deal. Drop a freestyle verse about anything. It has to be 8 bars which is 16 lines. Drop one and then comment on others. Be critical on their work so that they know if their flow goes or its a no. aiiight? OK GO HARD LET'S GOOO!!!!!

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new member here.. wats up peeps!? hehe =) let me try this.

wassap wit some of the structure i see on this thread/
its messy like mann ya'll should be preaching instead/
but anyway i aint here to hate i'mma jst spit a quick verse/
sometimes my cockiness work that others get scared & reverse/
let me introduce myself, yo wats go0d members of 'thisis50'/
afta i'm done wit ma eight bars i'll be back so dont miss me/
almost forgot they call me Bebe Riz and i'm from the philippines/
my rhymes are razor sharp and can work like a guillotine/
callin me out is like puttin your name on the line/
im a lot skilled, my words can hurt ya like porcupines/
watch out now coz i can damage ya pride by mistake/
my tounge is venomous and can kill fast like a sea snake/
i see some of these kats just copy paste the lyrics they post/
if you need money just quit rappin and get wit your gay boss/
ya'll dont find a female rapper all the time i know im rare/
try to mess with me and i can be your wors nightmare/
i lay in that p**** like it was a jakuzzy, u gon shoot me with u uzzy?, ima make my domesticated hipo who is also albe to speak do some sex freak sex without rest on u ass and u cheeks, ur respect is mouse on a house with no chees, enemies c me high watch me talking like im wayne on some shrop krak kokaine, think my brain is insaine, not in a loko murder way in a way thats half retarded half gay (i already told u c me talking like im wayne). til their girlfriends think may when its may it kan b then it is, u heart freze, u ask why u say please but theres no god only nut in her mouth, where im from? the south the the the south jajajajajaja this was dumb
I, go hard but some s*** for me don't add up/
Like how I ain't signed and this that crack n**** bag up/
I swear sometimes I just son ya'll niggas,
I can pull my belt off and mike jack you n****/
I'm ready for the critics to nit pick at me,
Cuz I don't dress gay I never had a heart on my sleeve/
I can take a punch but it's hard if I lose/
Niggas sleep now and its a shame if you snooze/
The damage has been done I don't reply to a fool,
Because a wise man can't tell a fool from who's who/
This is for success not about the best/
If I make it there I hope my heart can stand the test/
Cause you always hear em say that its lonely at the top/
Probaly cause the all just left and they the roc/

I ain't need 16
comment if u have the time
im a newbie on this site and i aint tryna be a smart ass. ur verse is pretty go0d hmm but try have stronger rhymin words?
Niggas need to quit rappin for free and get money
I need money
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As soon as ya time's up/the glock and the tops bust/niggaz get chopped up/ da hoes get knocked up/u can prolly cop and get popped up/ but yall betta know that i got more blocks den a pop up/ u should know da rule s***/ the 5 to tha 4 spit/ uzi got da all grip/ banana got da full clip/ first they talkin trash niggaz sayin dat dey gon spit/ den we run up on em and dey all about tha b*******/ yall niggaz 2 faced/ yall f***** fruitcakes/ spit bout how u move weight/ i can f***** move cake/ a lotta niggaz pop trash but dem dudes gay/ da onli scope dey had was da top on da toothpaste/ o yall grown up/ well yall betta own up/ i'll load da chrome up/ i'll blow ya home up/ get a hole in a n**** like a doughnut/ da 4 clap have him leanin back like he stoned up/ yo who da man B/ cause yall can't stand beef/ i'll clap on ya man G/ get smacked wit da damn piece/ if yall niggaz wanna pop get da damn heat/ cause cats don't touch ya gats like dey anitiques
I decided to drop in here cause in the 4 cypher they bit like I never SAID THE BARS

Names mars cause I'm a new breed like a martain and my swag make chicks "slide" like DEBIT CARDS

These niggas is SEE THROUGH nuffin to BEAT YO flows ILLEGAL, n**** talk slick like the kid won't SEE YOU

I'm a skater, so I outgrew EVISU shots to the stomach like diabetics open ya abdomen, spill the contents, so don't think crab legs when I say we can SEA FOOD (SEE FOOD)

See I do this rap s*** for a livin they half in, they need to QUIT MESSIN before I pop that SMITH WESSON, end these haters and QUIT STRESSIN

When I spit I go hard and usually teach a B**** LESSONS, bring niggas lives under scrutiny, and when they exposed they "disappear" like "magic", now that's a TRICK QUESTION

When I spit my METAPHORS you hear hot s*** no other rapper SAID BEFORE

Battle me and you DEAD OF COURSE see my rhymes "take shape" I'm 3d they flat and square like the paces on a CHECKERBOARD

I'm king on the 4 bar cypher, why not try and collab INSTEAD OF HATIN

I'm the illest on the 4 bar cypher, possibly the whole site, why not try and collab INSTEAD OF HATIN, b**** I'm like a dairy farmer I'm busy CHEDDA MAKIN

Learn from the best, this is informal EDUCATION, see the (STEEL) make his head (PILL (PEEL)) like MEDICATION

Money the only thin that move me, not concerned wit the fuss that a chicks ASS MAKE I'm the best text mc on 4 sites plus in 4 years b**** I'm PAST GREAT

Chicks lookin for worms like BASS BAIT but "shocked" when I show em my "electric eel" so chicks love to "top mars off" like a GAS TANK

See my dream is to have mad cash in the bank, and a couple of SICK CARS its all possible cause I rock niggas wit SLICK BARS smoke kush outta BIG GARS

Let's do some math bring the "tec in (TEKKEN)" my word is "law" so call me "marshall" I get paid like "toll booths" so I get "welfare (well fare)" like WIC CARDS I stand alone so the rest don't compare "hall (haul)" the "all" outta marshall, flow permanent like THICK SCARS remove what was instructed and the solution to the equation for the best will always be the same cause you GET MARS

This s*** is me I BLEED IT go crazy without rhymin, so I became the best and that's no SECRET, and f*** this last line could have left it at 15 cause half my s*** was better than some whole drops, the bars are a courtesy to the fans cause to prove I'm the best I honestly don't NEED IT
it's me once again j.a.z the slogan t.h.e.o.d.o.r.e if didn't know it mean talented,hero,estatic,opportunist,determine,outstanding,real,eternatity. but like I said im back again with another good lyrical meal.


im not playin it this year
like jada Im bringing pain and tourture, so rappers will fear
so nice with the rhymes im killing them, Im like a sniper blind
I swear when I get rich, Im gonna probably make a toast then pour some wine
Naw) I just thank god
I tell you all this mess with my uncle death put my mind more off even but odd
people rap about things but never lived it
funny how the truth comes knocking on your door for a visit
I swear every man seem weak now of days, i seen more guts from marry poppins
at first hip hop used to be about real thoughtful stuff by now it change to shoppin
i be confuse with the world now days something like ms revenge statements
it's seem love,god truth is put away just for a good sensation
Im from the hood baltimore aka Charmcity
we have some good days and some days that not pretty
(hmph but thats everyday). I swear we got so much gangs i thought it was L to a
if you didn't catch on that means a state, with city called california
I swear the east coast seem like it lost it's own aroma
peope going crazy from state to state
man) im tried rapping now and besides I gotta go fix my mother a plate
man) she so lazy for goodness sakes
ugh f*** me! i acctdentally cut and pasted part of a bar twice... smgdh @ typos... look over it my apologies ppl
f*** rappin
the skills people tell me im lackin
so im about to give up
but other people telling me to live up to the dream
see the future gleam
not go to being a fiend
try to be king
and just do my thing
im not sure yet
maybe i'll do my thing and not let anyone knock me down
let everyone hear how i sound
let everyone feel me pound for pound
and show em i aint just noise
this may be a big choice
i can no longer stay silent
i feel this can get violent
it can lead to riotin'
ok now give me a beat
that i can keep
and drop some bars
lead to me gettin some cars
and f****** up all the retards
i do what i wanna do
anyone say other wise, what you gonna do?
Hughes they claim is so so but try me and on the low low you know i got the flow to destroy any in my path just walk by take a hit and i just laugh thats what you call rap to me thats just an act give it up im tired of all y'all niggas talk a big game ill shoot you this and i sold that n**** give up that bullshits a rap used to be that was the only way to big time in the hood but did you ever think using your brain to maintain a good grade oh no thats insane cant front for the homies might get blasted on by making your moms proud n**** you runnin around in the streets to me you look like a f***** clown get your head out of the clouds now a days you can go to school to take advantage i know you heard of obama now try to become number 2 in the oval office and not just another statistic for the world im gettin mine so its best you get yours instead shuttin open doors you never know where they can lead so take my advice give up the gangster look cuz the s**** overplayed instead read a book and when you boys ask why dont hang no more tell em youd rather live to see light of another day instaed of being shot down or jailed spending the rest of your life in hell

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