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The 16 Bar Diss DROP Thread.Who Can Embarrass The Person Above The Most??

You know whats the deal. Drop a freestyle verse about anything. It has to be 8 bars which is 16 lines. Drop one and then comment on others. Be critical on their work so that they know if their flow goes or its a no. aiiight? OK GO HARD LET'S GOOO!!!!!

Tags: 16, 50, 8, bars, cent, diss, eminem, freestyle, g-unit, hard, More…tony, verse, yayo

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( yeah) its jaz, the best emcee (yeah) im the man

I come from the town of the sand

uncle got kill oh man oh man

( ok im done taking it slow) my flow insane I swear i need therapy

Im already cranky so you better not disturb me

my unlce dead some neggas laughin, but the jokes on you

time to carry on my uncle torch, and gets haters frowns stuck like glue

it's the anticipated king on this rap site

im even the king outside of this, my ryhmes are so nice
red alert,red alert escape from cases that purge,central nerve shutdown till they mentals is blurred, questioning wordz of intelligence pestering nerds,observe while im telling this because the message is pure, you off course tryin ta change the way my mental explores, u cant part wit it because my section is raw, its like a axe in a war that cuts right thru sword u assed out tryin to go against a dominate force, blood pours out your arteries and drips to the floor, this that evil rap,kanevil track,decietful acts,fire breathing kept em back,heats a 3rd degree attack,kept em traped, tourcher rack, toss em back, nex detached, cardiac, watts impact , chest on blast ,in the ground like artifacts,time is now harmless style got me droppin verses down,vicious wit a twisted crown,king on mic's, u no me now, this is dominance it's obvious that i conquer this,wordsmyff the man thats made of armaments, strickin by your consequence, posion to dishonoring, before death they call on him, blood from lims drained from vains and strikend sin, gravity will take him in, aint nobody safe ta live.... -wordz
YEAH! WARNING! WARNING! HERE I COME BIG PAULS AROUND U BETTER RUN TRAILING BEHIND YOUR LIL TAILS GO AGAINST ME AH YOU FAILED EAT MY DUST I AINT FUST IF UR MOMMA UGLY I AINT FUST IF SHE WANNA F*** ME I AINT FUST I AINT FUST I REALLY AINT FUST OH NO I EAT YOU BOY ANOTHER 1 BITES THA DUST IF YOUR FRIENDS WITH ME DONT GET HAPPY DONT TRY AND SPEND TIME WITH ME ITS TIME TO BELEVEIN GO AGAINST ME IM A HURT YOUR FEELINGS, TWRIL LIGHT SO BRIGHT ITCHY TRIGGER FINGER LIVE LONG DIE HARD IM GETTIN BIGGER BETTER FREASHER BARS IM SO HOT IM LIKE AN EINGIN ON A CAR SOMTHINGS UP ITS ALMOST TIME I KILL ND RIP YA LIKE A OLD PIT BULL IN HIS PRIME (GROWLS) I TURN THAT FROWN UPSIDE DOWN ROB YOUR CROWN YOU CANT TAKE ME DOWN IM FROM UB3 TAKE IT EASY F** MY GRAMMER MANS LIKE ME WILL RUN WITH A HAMMER. :)
yo what happenin am just rappin hopin for all this s*** to go away whats the chances of that when it gets worse everyday it was only yesterday my bro started hangin out with a gay today he might say he's one damn it man how could he think that would be fun.
It's the that kid jaz(man) been awhile since i spit I bet hasby like damn what happen to jaz it's been awhile since he spit lol naw but im' here to feed yaw once again welcome to thanksgiving if you starving ok time to get it in:

Its the top spitter
the one hitter quiter
I spent time with hip hop, im her babysitter
rappers u boring me, u put me to sleep
my rhymes feeding yaw neggaz, you can't wait to eat
I don't want to be the best rapper, I just want to be the best I can be
I play with rhymes like ray with da piano, all i need is the key
I'm david and goliah, so how can i ever stand to defeat
If I win I win ,if I lose I win
That's just rules of jaz aka jonathan
I'm the real deal never been a foney
I be the reason why beyounce sister leaving tony
IM the defintion of defintion
Im hip hop hop Dawn, so out with the dirty dishes
it's so easy, i do it so easy
Im trying get big money, not young money like weezy
I been through alot, the lord is my witness
It's the era of jaz, I mean business
If you don't get it by now, I aint gonna dummy down
It's the kid jaz from bmore aka charm city, who hold it down?
I'm leaving now
thanks
ok Im back again Im gonna feed yaw once again mite as well call me mr. feed you lol naw just playing.Time to get it in you know the name j.a.z oh by the way im not the best emcee im just the best i can be


I'm that sandtown hidden secret
the lyrical amagedon, I leave everyone speechless
I seen aLot in my life
I been through alot of pain, some fuss, some fights
I'm before the time, when men act like boys
before when neggas was playin with the truth, who they really are like toys
Im a 80's baby, im a 80's baby
1988 where I was born bay.... be
yeah the kid still nice, still smooth
I'm a grand champ in every thing I do
I win even if I lose
I told you I rather be the best i can be,then be the best emcee
so expect 100% when you messing with me
Im giving yaw gifts, like u.p.s hand deliver
I'm giving yaw cold feet ,giving yaw the shivers
my flow nice, I perfet my technique
I feel like i can push rhymes even in my sleep
It's so easy (lol) damn it's so easy
watch me kid, like this the j.a.z show on tv
A 9 iz packed, cocked, aimed & bout ta bust a shell,
ALi flowz r stacked ta drop insane fire lik he's from hell,
Spittin raw rugged heat lik he blastin leds,
I'll explode on tha mic wit dynomite from tha head,
TNT explosive they let loose lik a gat got hollows to shed,
Wit atomic waves dat turn emotionz 2 shred.
Heartless & wrekless yet so legit, Cold as a 9 but fully equipped,
One blast away on rippin tha core of gangsta s***.
1 twist away from bein corrupted
a step further on bein abducted
keep ta yaself n all ya other dumbshit
kats goin realize who they f***** wit
I keep it basic thats tha bottom line
every dawg has his day n here iz mine
2 thingz n tha world ALi holdz n tact
his ballz n his word, other kats cant compare wit that
On my grind tryin to put West 59 on tha Map
I'm going to get money up just to get my assets up
My ass needs a pushet cause I'm lackin funds. f***
me, the world, your friends, and my parents too
cus all i see are f*** ups around the life playpen.
In the end I see, coming soon to a theater near you
reviews said better than the armadgeddeon, trueeee
I don't know where to go, paranoid, i'm racin'
to my heartbeat rushing down like a bass beatin'
Confused and complexed like where's my simple sex
I'd X'D off the map currently I'm so irrelevant
to the scene I appear desperate and so lonely,
opposite is the fact but lately havin' trouble, buddy
I say one thing and do the other
Last week was cool, but now cursed my mother
down the drain, washed up is how i am real talk
call me emo cause the tion is ruining my life now son.
nice but i know you can do better than that
i know i could just airing out issues.... u kno.
nice timming for light limeing
my bright shining more than a
blood diming as priceless a gold shining
ready for old rhyming perfect for coal mining
nothing but four lining impecable with word rhyming

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