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Permalink Reply by Mont On Deck on February 17, 2009 at 11:42pm

straight forward with the flow
machines blow laylow history wana go?
who wana flow grab a mic
here's a tip smoke some ice
hope your nice take the flight
then end up walkin in the lights
there's your life...lyricly
literally kill with some words
do the same on the curb in the burbs
we back to watchin movie's
chillin with these groupies
f*** em in my Gucci's
LouisV, alligators kill a hater
yellow blue linen just a money pacer
that was yo b****(yea) f**** groupie hoe
she see me killin you and now she knockin my dough
but i mean knockin door cause she jock my flow
see me on shine got her watchin my glow
but i really dont have a clue
threw her to my crew
made her mad to go back to you
cause I widow your boo
Mont dont killem again im too rude
but yet and still im 2Kool

-Mont On Deck

PotHead Ent.
Find us in the Sky

(adlibs)

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Permalink Reply by Mont On Deck on February 18, 2009 at 6:02pm

Mont On Deck hiding boy you making me laugh
remember the dicks you seen(f**) dude thats sad
u a f** lookin for d*** i make it where u cant s***
im waste'n my time flowin with u i rather watch a flick
but imma keep going flows come flows go
revenge is out the closet read his post is shows
u gettin f*** by russian troops screamin dat foreign s***
i'll throw u a molotov cocktail kill yaself b****
oops i killed again suicidals dont say my name
and you had the nerve never type my s*** in vain
i write my name in falling rain me and Jesus that close
drag ya body out ya casket my man ^^^ damned ya ghost
i would take the time to click on ya profile
revenge08 f*** it were in 09 now
here goes my last bar bet u wish u were 50cent
hitchu when 9 shots and he and drinkin s***

-Mont On Deck
(adlibs)

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Permalink Reply by Haspy on February 18, 2009 at 4:46pm

It's how I feel in the moment all about these fake rappers
All they do is talk s*** about their w***** n' their swagger
Gucci, Louie V or Berry not relevant to the scene
So why they speak on terms nonexistent to the team
I don't scream for ice cream but I do seek help
Cause these boys need an awakening I already felt
the rush of poison, rushed up to the brain
The violent words respond back out the mouth from the vein
I can't complain because it's their environment,
But some of the s*** that comes out sounds like vomit
If so if this is the truth then f*** me too
Cause this is the type of s*** that gets me toothless.
Here's the last line and I hope you forget
the next words spit. did you make your mind yet?

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Permalink Reply by Haspy on February 18, 2009 at 7:25pm

GUYS!!!

first, this is not a DISS discussion. if anything leave that s*** for another thread.

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Permalink Reply by Mont On Deck on February 18, 2009 at 8:41pm

so u were'nt coming at me in the previous flow??? almost look like u call it...

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Permalink Reply by Haspy on February 18, 2009 at 11:00pm

no i wasn't coming at you. I was inspired by a B.o.B's Generation lost and listen to his lyrics. and then i saw ur lyrics and it fueled the engine to try out b.o.b's message. It wasn't good but it was an attempt. I try different styles of writing to see how ppl write or see if i could blend it to my style.

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Permalink Reply by KAISER SOSAY on February 18, 2009 at 8:48pm

WHEN IT COMES TO DRUG PREFERNCE I MIGHT BE (GAY)
CUZ I PREFER THE BOY OVER THE GIRL ON ANY (DAY)
I NEVER REALLY LIKED ANY STIMULANTS OR ANY [WEED]
I LOVE DRINKING & POPPING DERIVATIVES OF THE POPPY [SEED]
I LOVE AN OPIATE HIGH WHILE I BUMP MUSIC DRIVING IN MY (REGAL)
LISTEN TO SONG #6 ON THE B COMING BY BEANIE (SIGEL)
PURPLE RAIN FT BUN B FEELING NO PAIN AKA EUPHORIC & [LOVELY]
HURRICANE IN MY BRAIN WHEN IM SOBER LIFES A B**** & SHES [UGLY]
IM A WALKING OXY MORON IM USED TO BEING HAPPILY (DEPRESSED)
LESS OF A MORON WHEN I POP OXYS NOT STRESSED OR MENTALLY (REGRESSED)
THEY SAY IGNORANCE IS BLISS WHEN I WAS A KID I USED TO WATCH [HE-MAN]
MY ADULT MIND'S THE MOVIE SHAWSHANK LIKE MORGAN I JUST WANNA BE [FREE-MAN]
I DONT NEED MATERIALISTIC ITEMS OR AN EXPENSIVE (POSSESION)
I JUST WANT HELP WITH MY DEMONS WHEN I FIGHT EM & BE FREE FROM (DEPRESSION)
LIFE IS A GAME I DONT FULLY UNDERSTAND HOW TO PLAY [YET]
I GOTTA GAMBLE TO WIN & BE HAPPY CUZ ITS AN EVERYDAY [BET]

BTW (BOY) & (GIRL) ARE DRUG SLANG FOR (HEROIN) & (COCAINE)

TIGHT THREAD HASPY NO DISRESPECT IN OUR DISS BATTLE IN A PREVIOUS THREAD

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Permalink Reply by Haspy on February 18, 2009 at 11:04pm

I Oh no doubt. it's just rappin' also i feel your flow... i like it alot. This is the first and only 8 bar that got me excited.

EDIT: too many syllables on 1st line of bar 3 imo....

other than that its tight. the story line is there. the use of words are there.
fav. line.... IM A WALKING OXY MORON IM USED TO BEING HAPPILY (DEPRESSED)
LESS OF A MORON WHEN I POP OXYS NOT STRESSED OR MENTALLY (REGRESSED)

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Permalink Reply by KAISER SOSAY on February 19, 2009 at 8:50pm

THANX HASPY MUCH RESPECT 2 U LYRICALLY ALSO HOMEY KEEP IT UP

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Permalink Reply by KAISER SOSAY on February 18, 2009 at 9:13pm

COME ON SOMEBODY DROP ANOTHER 16 OR ATLEAST CRITIQUE MY REPLY

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Permalink Reply by SneakBastid on February 19, 2009 at 12:05pm

i think u got the best out of all these. For real. I changed my line to coke see" instead of oxy. Most of my songs are about oxys n s***. sweet flo mane.

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Permalink Reply by SneakBastid on February 19, 2009 at 11:43am

Check dis s*** out.

SneakBastid a.k.a. ShittyPanz
At the club I be in my stanz cuz I don't dance
Don't give a f*** if i got no fanz
my planz, I'll beat ya azz with my barehandz

And u get no 2nd chanze, with me
Grab the straw up my nose goes coke see
S***, I be gettin lit, whenever I see fit
and u can eat a d*** real quick, u ain't s***

Cuz I be gettin high, like all of the time
with my grind on my mind and mind on crime
I'm slippery, , slimey,, dirty,, grimey
put armor-all on my d*** just to keep it shiney

U want some of me, please come try me
I'm high all da time, good luck trying to find-me
One thangs fo sure, u can find me wit yo trick
catching head from her azz cuz she loves my fat d***

copyright 2006 SneakBastid www.myspace.com/sneakbastid

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