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NEW 26 BAR VERSE I WROTE!!! **CHECK OUT, AND COMMENT** THANKS

A NEW VERSE I WROTE RECENTLY...(POSTED ON THISIS50.COM, ON 7/29/08):


**NEW 26 BARZ!!!** "Get It All Off My Chest"

new emcee name green haze commin up in tha MUZIK-GAME/
just like a rookie with no fame, most ppl's NEW-S***'Z-LAME/
similar too an emcee on hiz sophomore album WITH-OUT-TRYIN/
after theyre rich like bill gates but cant make a track WITH-OUT-LYIN/
exactly like a deciever, but im only starting to make HOT-TRACKS/
unlike one hit wonders, that on there new s*** FLOPS-N'-SLACKS/
in there chance of bein successful like a bum not PUTTIN-THERE/
minds tuh there lyrics n' flow, now i'm GOOD-IN-SHARE/
of writtens getting released just like a proffessional THATS-KNOWN/
big like somebody famous, time tuh git my own TRACKS-THROWN/
out in the public so i can get heard, as if its my FIRST-TIME/
of ppl hearing me, now this reminds me of me FIRST-RHYME/
i ever wrote and what i had going through my OWN-MIND/
of my dream of being a hiphop emcee, so DONT-MIND/
what i say if ya dont like it cause i dont care WHAT-YA-THINK/
of my s*** like an ignorant person, and F***-THA-LINKZ/
tuh mainstream deals, cuz theyre all just about THA-CASH/
like a money hugry sneak, so make sure that YA-ASS/
dont get caught up in that deal, of getting signed and F*****-OVER/
like u didnt plan it tuh be, cuz afterya feel like some1 HUNG-OVER/
one more thing, im un-signed and NOT with a RECORD-DEAL/
stop saying s*** that didnt come from me and SET-UR-FIELD/
too ur distace from my words lyrically cuz i dont LIKE-RUMORS/
like a victim of one, thats just not my vision and SIGHT-OF-HUMOR/
like something funny to be spreaded, becuz i dont want S***-SPREADED/
unless it comes from me, now how did ya's all feel about THIS-RECORD?/

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Nice... Props...!
CHEROKEE that s*** was asss man ....just playin homey it was nice bruhh
that s*** nice
Nice!
Thanks for the comments everybody.
Hope too get more comments from more people soon!
record it bro
It's hot!! :)
yh i like it u shud record it
nice, but the las 2 lines r weak, no dis respect! the rest was hot : )
to simple not enough thaught sounds something hip hop harry would drop

on the real seems like you wanna write practice this s**** to basic I aint feeling it
not bad...
i see a few spots u can revise .. but u got some talent !

keep writin!
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